We had completed our 4th draft and we were happy with it, but we got more feedback just to be certain and we got ideas of putting in some music whilst our protagonist character wakes up just to make sure it isn't boring as it was silent and wasn't very interesting.
The music we added is music that you would typically hear during the openings of other teen angst films like Easy A for example as we liked that it brought the whole opening together and makes it more exciting and will make people want to watch on.
Another section that we managed to change was the part where the Triple L's find Faye in bed, as they open the door we slowed it down so there is more of a build up of anticipation when they open it and it is more of a shock when Faye gets revealed in Lucy's bed, we did this because it will make the audience want to know what had happened and how it will be resolved between Lucy and Faye as they were meant to be friends so they will want to carry on watching.
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