Changes for 3rd draft

Changes that we made to make the 3rd draft include differernt fonts for all of our voice overs and titles because once we had got feedback from friends and family members lots of people said they were hard to read because of the font and they weren't up for long enough. So we went back and changed all of the fonts, even for the photos of the main characters when they are introduced.

We changed the fonts for these because before there was a white border around each letter and by taking that away it makes the words stand out more, and makes it easier to read in the time you have to read it.

We changed the font for the title of the Triple L's because we found this font to be more appropriate for the teen angst genre as it looks like more of a font that we have seen in other teen angst films. This one is also alot clearer and easier to read, we have put it in pink because it fits in with the girly type of opening that we are focusing on. Also this photo is the one of the 'mean girls' so we found that pink was the most suitable for them.

We changed all of these parts when the voice overs come on becaue the font wasn't clear enough and they went too quickly and no one could read them in time. Also we wanted to change the font to the one that we used for the titles so it all links in and looks the same. We used pink again because it is a running theme throughtout our whole opening.


We have already noticed changes that we want to some of this draft, where the scene where the Triple L's find Faye in bed, when there is a side angle of them about to see Faye we put a slow motion effect so it makes the whole shock from the Triple L's more dramatic and builds up the anticipation for the reveal.