We got feedback from our first draft and we decided to add/change a few things, our changes included adding more voice overs as there is too much dialogue and it isn't very clear what's going on it will also seem like more of an opening for a teen angst and also it wasn't very clear who was who and what the actual storyline was so by adding more voice overs it will make it more clear on what's going on.
Also there were some sections can could be taken out all together as they just weren't necessary or were too long. From the feedback we got, it was clear that the school scene of our opening was too long and some of it was not needed for an opening so by shortening that down it will also give us a lot more time for our voice overs.
Voice overs that need to be added are from Faye's perspective and they will introduce all of the main characters by freezing the character and a voice over will be added over the top to say who they are. As well as a voice over before the rewind to state that something is going to happen.
Also we need to add in who it was edited by and who the directors were.
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